Not bad. I like how you have just enough detail for the song, ie bass, melody, harmony, background, the only thing I could say is more variety to the drums. I do love how they were very gradual in buildup parts. But something feels missing from the main spots. Probably cause the drums only worked in 8ths. Maybe fool around with some 16ths and see what you can do. This wasn't bad overall. I wish my 4-vote didn't effect the result THAT much, but nothing i can do with a 5.5x voting power. Keep at it