It's pretty good. But it's not perfect.
I give you kudos. There's one things that pisses me off more than anything here on Newgrounds, and that's when there's a song on the top 30 all time or weekly top 5, that only has one instrument and one drum. Songs with no detail at all. You my friend have earned a spot in the top 30. You have the perfect amount of detail needed in a REAL song.
The only thing I would change really is the volume control. It's distorted. But I dunno if that was intentional.
Feel free to check out my song too. I'm also in the top 30 at #4.