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I like it for a demo. Really could do something with it. I'm feeling a bit of a deep dark vibe from this. Perhaps it's the reverb. It seems to drag a little bit. Totally understandable, it can be hard to get just right sometimes. If only i did have an electric guitar. I have electronic midi lol. Pretty neat either way. Everything was smooth and the flow was right. Really kinda chill. Keep at it

ADR3-N responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, had a bit of an ominous feeling. Was inspired by a scripture that came to mind when I thought about how most of the world is under the thumb of masons and other luciferians who may or may not participate in cannibalism, human sacrifice, and various other nefarious things. I may revisit it.

Also, not just looking for specific instruments. If you felt like programming something, I'd be game.

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Automatically I was hooked. The guitar and MIDI combination? And the MIDI kinda does sound spooky. For some reason, Pokémon Tower comes to mind, with all the Ghastly. I feel that the bass drum could be a bit heavier. I didn't exactly pinpoint it, but there's a synth that comes in around 3:30 that's pretty cool. Sounds very popcorny. XD That has potential. This has a pretty cool running away vibe to it throughout. Liked the portamento play at 5:20. Last 30 seconds was unique. We need more of that nowadays.

Overall the flow was very good. I would space out sometimes in a trance, so to say. Keep rockin it, Roxy!

9/10, 5/5

Honestly I was expecting a lot less. For an unfinished track this definitely blows other WIPS I've heard here on NG right out of the water. I love the flow of this one and the riff setup. Keep at it. I would definitely like to hear the finished product. Try to add more detail to the bass

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Not bad. I like this chill kinda deep vibe. You wrote the lyrics, i presume. Always a good skill to have. I will say, i think a little reverb or echo with the voice would've helped. You're not that bad of a singer too. But the best part is just how well everything connected together, which is what makes a song a song.

Keep it up. Me likey

TaintedLogic responds:

Thanks a lot for the review! I agree about adding reverb to the vocals - I need to get better at mixing them. And I did write the lyrics, yes. :) Thanks again!

I entered too. There's a wide spread of competition out there. I tried my best. I have no regrets.

Lol, Pokemon reference

For real though good luck to all

ChronoNomad responds:

Good luck to all, indeed. And hey, thanks for dropping a quick review! Much appreciated.

Will you travel across the land, searching far and wide? Pokémon references FTW!

Something told me that FatRat was here on Newgrounds. Although to be honest, I was introduced to you through Pandora. Now THAT'S an acheivement. Good work bro. I'm a fan

Pretty neat loop. It's peaceful. No drums either. Sometimes if you use it right it can be great. You did just that. Ending sounds unfinished that's it

ConceptSama responds:

no i just fished it the full one is up on soundcloud
https://soundcloud.com/concept-sama/valentine-keep-me-calm

Not bad. There seems to be an unbalance with the drums and the rest of it. Try playing with volumes a little. I know, it's hard to get it just right. It sounded more classical than rock to me. It was pretty cool. Keep at it

ThaliaSolari responds:

Thanks for your opinion!

Yo! Pauly B here, formerly Paul Stetich. Super Sonic fan, ex-indy wrestler, and Drum 'n Bass oriented musician. Just a guy chasing big dreams. Feel free to check out my music! Add me to your social media with links below! Catch you in the Audio Portal!

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