I like it for a demo. Really could do something with it. I'm feeling a bit of a deep dark vibe from this. Perhaps it's the reverb. It seems to drag a little bit. Totally understandable, it can be hard to get just right sometimes. If only i did have an electric guitar. I have electronic midi lol. Pretty neat either way. Everything was smooth and the flow was right. Really kinda chill. Keep at it
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, had a bit of an ominous feeling. Was inspired by a scripture that came to mind when I thought about how most of the world is under the thumb of masons and other luciferians who may or may not participate in cannibalism, human sacrifice, and various other nefarious things. I may revisit it.
Also, not just looking for specific instruments. If you felt like programming something, I'd be game.
Um. This has nothing to do with Sonic first off. It got better in the middle but it really just sounds like you just threw something together and called it good. There's no motive behind this. Just one instrument and a drum. I dunno if this is a joke piece or what but it's decent for what it is. At least the note structure made sense
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Automatically I was hooked. The guitar and MIDI combination? And the MIDI kinda does sound spooky. For some reason, Pokémon Tower comes to mind, with all the Ghastly. I feel that the bass drum could be a bit heavier. I didn't exactly pinpoint it, but there's a synth that comes in around 3:30 that's pretty cool. Sounds very popcorny. XD That has potential. This has a pretty cool running away vibe to it throughout. Liked the portamento play at 5:20. Last 30 seconds was unique. We need more of that nowadays.
Overall the flow was very good. I would space out sometimes in a trance, so to say. Keep rockin it, Roxy!
Honestly I was expecting a lot less. For an unfinished track this definitely blows other WIPS I've heard here on NG right out of the water. I love the flow of this one and the riff setup. Keep at it. I would definitely like to hear the finished product. Try to add more detail to the bass
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Not bad. I like this chill kinda deep vibe. You wrote the lyrics, i presume. Always a good skill to have. I will say, i think a little reverb or echo with the voice would've helped. You're not that bad of a singer too. But the best part is just how well everything connected together, which is what makes a song a song.
Keep it up. Me likey
Thanks a lot for the review! I agree about adding reverb to the vocals - I need to get better at mixing them. And I did write the lyrics, yes. :) Thanks again!
I entered too. There's a wide spread of competition out there. I tried my best. I have no regrets.
Lol, Pokemon reference
For real though good luck to all
Good luck to all, indeed. And hey, thanks for dropping a quick review! Much appreciated.
Will you travel across the land, searching far and wide? Pokémon references FTW!
Something told me that FatRat was here on Newgrounds. Although to be honest, I was introduced to you through Pandora. Now THAT'S an acheivement. Good work bro. I'm a fan
Wow. Someone else who had this! That was awesome though. I kinda wish they'd do a remake for the new consoles like they did Skyrim. But I digress, onto the music. Very well followed. Liked your choice of instruments. This just sounded pretty epic all around. Well done. You get a 5-vote too
Thanks a lot Pauly! Glad you enjoyed my little track :) Well i am a huge fan of games like the elder scrolls series, dragon age and so many more. I always wanted to write music in that epic / fantasy style. The mod Rathunas will have its alpha release next week. So if you stil should have got oblivion somewhere - maybe its a good moment to rediscover the game again. The mod extends it between 5 and 10 hours of gameplay. Its a full quest mod with loads of characters, voice acting (about 35 voice actors involved), its own soundtrack (we are 2 composers contributing tracks to the mod) and the whole project was carefully programmed for over 4 years now. And the best about it: Its for free ;) Thanks a lot for your kindness good sir!
All the best,
Pretty neat loop. It's peaceful. No drums either. Sometimes if you use it right it can be great. You did just that. Ending sounds unfinished that's it
no i just fished it the full one is up on soundcloud
Not bad. There seems to be an unbalance with the drums and the rest of it. Try playing with volumes a little. I know, it's hard to get it just right. It sounded more classical than rock to me. It was pretty cool. Keep at it
Thanks for your opinion!
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