PaulyBFromDa303's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Air Struck - NG Edit]

Yeah it's better than your last

But it still feels like a little something is missing. It's great that you at least mixed it up a little bit. And it's a lot better than just one note over and over again. I really don't know what it is. Perhaps it's the tensity.

In a way, anyway. You demonstrated great tensity buildup from around 1:58 to 2:46 but hen 2:47 hit I felt that all that buildup and suspension was wasted. It just wasn't too tense after that. You should've added much more to the drums at that point like a few cymbals and claps or something.

But granted, it was way better than the first one. You're getting there dude. Keep at it

MagiKnight responds:

Thanks Man, I didnt realized about that, maybe the missing part is another lead, or an upper melody or something more exciting, which is your advice? What kind of synths should i use in your opinion?, after all, did you like the track? hehe, thanks Man.

[Nav - Quantum Fire]

Ah yes I remember this.

Pretty cool. Just add a dark room with laser lights flashing every now and then and it's perfect. LOL

But fo' real though, this is cool.

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Nav responds:

It's junk, haha

[Thingeh]

Damn dude!

This is great. Seriously, I don't say this often, but you should think about doing this for a career. I know good music when I hear it. What the fuck are you doing on Newgrounds? You gotta try to get in the big times dude! Fo' real! I don't hear too much of this on Newgrounds. You should seriously look into doing this for a living.

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DjKirb responds:

Thanks Stetty, that means a lot Bud.

[Azure Lake Mobians Version]

Not bad man.

I love the instrument selection, and the drum selection is practically perfect for such a song.

However, I would probably have added a little more audible detail to it. I mean its practically only two instruments and a drum.

But its not bad for a start brutha. Keep at it man. You have tons of potential.

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Speedix responds:

Thanks! I made this six months ago, like right after I got Fruity Loops Studio 8. Im better now!(I think) Anyway, thanks for the tips, I'll make a new azure lake later.

[[Shadow TH - Egg Dealer]-Zero-]

Wow man

You've improved SO MUCH since I last heard your stuff . . . I know its been a while here too, I had other shit goin on lol.

And if you're only the 9th Shadow song, I wonder what mine was . . . lol

But hey there's not much I can say you can improve on. The detail is perfect, and Shadow's voice proved it. Excellent work brutha.

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X-Infinity-Zero responds:

Thanks man. Iv been going thru a lot lately so i needed to make good use of some of my anger and frustration and i think my frustration helped me out a lot lol.

I absolutly love how this song came out and the one thing i really like about it is that it has a lot of power to it. I almost think i over did it with the bass but i think it sounds awesome. Only problem now is that i dont know what to remix next lol.

Yep i made the 9th shadow song on newgrounds but i dont know what number urs is. We may need to look at the dates and figure it out.

Anyway thanks for the review and thanks for the inspiration.

-ZERO-

[Super Smash Bros Melee themeV2]

An improvement but not much

Still went too crazy with that one instrument, but I really like the instrument diversity and the more detail. I knew you could get better ^.^

Its still missing a certain something. Drums aren't too big a deal so it's not that . . . I can't quite put my finger on it. The ending was cool though.

Still needs work, but it's still an improvement. Keep at it brutha

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djresset responds:

ok thanks

[Go Hard by Ruff Huff]

Awesome!

Awesome beat. I'd love to hear someone break it down on this. You got the volume levels just right, you got everything almost perfect . . .

All I can say is there's maybe a little too much reverb. But I don't care about that. This is greatness nonetheless. Keep it up brutha.

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ruffhuff responds:

thanks alot man

[Super Smash Bros Melee themeV1]

Not bad, not good

You went WAY TOO CRAZY with the main instrument. Try changing the portamento level down a little bit so it doesn't sound so damn bouncy.

This needs a lot more detail. Better instruments, more audible background . . . and it wouldn't hurt to put in drums. That would've helped BIG TIME.

But don't get me wrong . . . I see the potential. I can hear it. You just gotta work on it a little, tweek up your skills, and you'll get better over time. Keep at it

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djresset responds:

comment my V2 of this song

[[DJP] SM64 Koopa Road Rmx]

Not bad

It's pretty good. But it's not perfect.

I give you kudos. There's one things that pisses me off more than anything here on Newgrounds, and that's when there's a song on the top 30 all time or weekly top 5, that only has one instrument and one drum. Songs with no detail at all. You my friend have earned a spot in the top 30. You have the perfect amount of detail needed in a REAL song.

The only thing I would change really is the volume control. It's distorted. But I dunno if that was intentional.

Feel free to check out my song too. I'm also in the top 30 at #4.

DJPureSuffer responds:

Thanks for the review man!

Yeah, I could have done a better job with the mastering. that's never quite been my specialty by any means. lol. one day i'll get it down... eventually! XD

I will check out your song as well fellow top 30-er :D

[dawn of the rising sun]

Wow. I'm impressed

This is a true techno club song. It's happy, and yet has that piazzaz that a techno song needs.

I'm sorry it hasn't been getting the attention you're asking for. Perhaps you should promote yourself. Not necessarily to the audio forum, unless its in the audio advertisements thread. Try doing something that the Audio portal and Newgrounds will remember.

Great job dude. Tons of potential here. Dont waste it

The XTreme Gamer
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DjClyme responds:

thanks ;)